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Just Another Broken Heart by ~fayloic:iconfayloic:



Each and every day
Is different and new
Some are good, yet some are bad
And some are just okay

Another day I try to tell
You some message of how I feel
But seems like you always ignore
And make me want to yell:

Can't you see? Or are you blind?
Or are you just out of your mind?
Didn't you hear? Are you deaf?
'Cause now I'm by myself

I thought you'd be some friend of mine
Who listens, cares, and is kind
Well, I guess I've done my part
While you're leaving me with
Just another broken heart

Each and every guy
Is different yet somewhat alike
Some are cute, and some are smart
And some make me want to cry

You may be just some other one
Who isn't who he seems
But there's no harm in giving you a chance
Just this, and then you're done!
So,

Use your eyes, don't act blind
Or are ya getting your mind realigned?
Use your ears, don't act deaf
'Cause I don't wanna be by myself

I wish you'd be some friend of mine
Who listens, cares, and is kind
Well, I guess I've done my part
While you're leaving me with
Just another broken heart

The way one feels inside
Can be hid or shown
You should know how I feel, 'cause I can't really hide

How I feel, so now you know
Yet another chance I've blown
Tears run down; to the ground
Not even you can wipe them away...

Tears in my eyes, I'm not blind
I can see I'm just another left behind
Sad music playing, I'm not deaf
Just want to be left all by myself

There'll never be that friend of mine
Who listens, cares, and is kind
I've tried to do my part
But I'm always left
With just another broken heart
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I can't write. I know that. Well, there's half an hour of my time I won't get back...
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You definately didn't waste your time on that! I really like it :)

It's not formally perfect, but does it have to be? It's written from deep inside your heart and makes one think about those things.
Your writing skills are definately better than your self-esteem :)

keep on going! You're doing great! :D
Aw that's so sad..... :(
But great! I like it. :)

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V is right. You shouldn't be hard on yourself all the time. You're a great writer! :D Keep up the good work.

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Heh... well, thanks, Vyzz.... ^^;
Yeah... <<; And thanks. ^^

Well, thanks Silver... but I just can't stop being like this. <<; It's just the way I am...

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